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Gif Practice (EDIT)

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Critique me please <3 How much should I price them?
I made it with a mouse so don't be too harsh...

*I am working on her blinking again, I fixed the black outline and white highlight *
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:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Uwahh I always write strict critiques, sorry if this is too harsh sob.

-Vision-
The idea is very clear and easy to see, and it is giving the whole innocent adorable appearance. The basic pose overall is very simple, but it is very significant! The cute chibi anatomy is just right for it's definition (chibi means little child). Great job by getting the correct vision.

-Originality-
Well-- I don't want to sound like a butt, but I've seen this pose plenty of times, so it is sorta unoriginal. But of course, originality is hard to obtain, so you shouldn't worry much about it. If you want to work on it, you should try drawing cool dyamic poses often and see how it goes. BUT, the character overall is not very common, or i haven't seen any like yours! It's very cute.

-Technique-
Sorry if i sound like a total butthole here, but I am absolutely confused why you have a black outline for the hair only. It sorta kills the concept of making the icon popout with a definite black outline. I believe you should had outlined the other outer part of the clothes and body or else only the hair pops out xD. I can't really say much for coloring, but my honest opinion is that maybe you should add more shading layer with the hair shine or else it might look like its part of the hair and not the shine xD. That's why i scored technique really low because i kinda see some mistakes. The animation is also too slow, you can fix it by adding more frames and speeding up the animation. But you did an absolutely amazing job on her ribbons.

-Impact-
Honestly, I didn't give me much as an impact, but it may differ for others xD. I guess because the shading are really closely related to the base color. You're not obligated to do so, but you should try playing around with the color theory xD.


SOBSOB sorry for such a harash critique, You're not obligated to listen to it, but I wish you to improve in the future! Your icon is absolutely adorable and keep on working! v u v. Your art and icons are still fabulous to me!